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My Book needs feedback (The Crystal Sword (Render Series))
Posted on 1/15/26 at 2:15 pm
Posted on 1/15/26 at 2:15 pm
Hello,
I am in the process of writing a Progression Fantasy, LitRPG series. I have 4.5 chapters done but am releasing a chapter per week on Royal Road
Here is the synopsis:
Here is the link to read it.
The Crystal Sword (Render Series)
Please, give me feedback.
I'm thirsty for it.
I am in the process of writing a Progression Fantasy, LitRPG series. I have 4.5 chapters done but am releasing a chapter per week on Royal Road
Here is the synopsis:
quote:
Silas is a young man of the earth, built for the harvest. But when the Blue Order tears apart his family and burns his life to the ground, Silas discovers a crystal core fragment of a parallel world that has already ended.
Bound to an ancient intelligence and armed with magic that is not cast but declared, Silas must learn to survive in a world awakening to forces it was never meant to hold. As more crystal cores surface and others claim their own, Silas is drawn into a growing conflict; one that mirrors the catastrophe that destroyed the crystal’s original world.
Render is a LitRPG / Progression Fantasy series featuring a physically imposing protagonist, a layered magic system spanning physical and spiritual dimensions, and a world where power is shaped by intent, cost, and consequence.
Here is the link to read it.
The Crystal Sword (Render Series)
Please, give me feedback.
I'm thirsty for it. 
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Posted on 1/16/26 at 12:01 pm to BlakeUhChu
I read the first chapter. It was more well written than a lot of the stuff I have seen on RR. Nice start, I wish you luck moving forward.
Posted on 1/16/26 at 8:38 pm to nes2010
CONGRATULATIONS! You're literally the only feedback I've gotten outside of friends and family lol
Seriously, thank you for the feedback. Means a bunch.
Seriously, thank you for the feedback. Means a bunch.
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